hey, thanks, yash! glad you liked it :-)

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lucky raindrop, sighed my jealous heart

to reach out where my entry’s barred.

How sweet

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thanks, yash.. the fact that you liked reading it makes a difference to me too!

hope to see you here again :-) 

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hello yash,

glad it got you interested :-)

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hi gregory,

yeah yeah...  :-)

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Interesting

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It's really a poem with difference.......yash

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Women: just like men , but full of wo.

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hello sceptic!

thanks for recommending!

i'm all for optimism and looking ahead to the future!

but this was just my take on the reality of a lot of women - mothers included - in our society... a life spent trying to fit in, adjust, accomodate, sacrifice, be abused, lead a peripheral and marginalised existence ... vis-a-vis the glorified divinified mother-india or hallmark-card kind!

i guess it's a generic "scream" against shallow mothers' day effusiveness - nothing more sinister or pathetic, don't worry!! :-)

do stop by again! :-))

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Hullo EW

What good is lamentation or recrimination?  To build a life a new foundation is not needed.  A forward looking stance and resolve to give the past a final burial is the stuff on which derailed lives are not just put back on rails but brought to the take off point for a flight into the future.

Cheers

Sceptic

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