thanks, yash.. the fact that you liked reading it makes a difference to me too!

hope to see you here again :-) 

It's really a poem with difference.......yash

thanks a lot, sudha, for stopping at my page. i'm glad you liked it! :-)

Very beautiful Electric Wind.

Your stanzas are very powerful and gives images of a wild night and simultaneously cold, dark nights... 

Good one,

Sudha

hello gregory! nice to read you.. thanks for the comment - and for the suggestion too! it was a youthful dream of mine once to work in the music field somehow - radio jockey or magazine editor or even CD cover designer.. but as most youthful dreams go, this one also got buried under the dust - so now it's down to blogging instead! :-)

thanks for the two lyrics of yours - loved them - especially thr girl in thr record store! :-)

keep posting...

thanks, nidhana, for dropping by. i'm glad you liked what you read :-))

hello meera!

good to see you here - and happy to note that you liked the poem. for me, visualisation / sensory perception is a very appealing part of poetry, and i'm glad you find this one "graphic" in parts!

keep dropping by :-)

Electric Wind,

Not in the face sort of style - but visual enough. 

Liked this one -graphic

where her dreams used to lie green and gold

is now occupied by your corpsed soul

devoured by the worms in your brain.

Excellent poetry. I just read your blog sing us a song, you’re the piano man  and I think you're a good prose writer too. You could be a music writer, perhaps for some Indian publishers, or you could start your own music blog. I'll send you some of my song lyrics that I think you might like. -- GF

Wow, a powerful one. Liked ur last stanza